Kia ora Quintin. My name is Danae, I am a student here at may road school and I am in rm 14 I am also a year six.
At first I thought this picture of the takahe was a pukeko. But not till i searched it up it obviously was a different species. That was very interesting. But next time you could make your drawing a bit larger because I found it hard to read. Anther thing you could fix up is making sure your title has a capital letter at the start. But otherwise.
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DeleteMy name is Danae, I am a student here at may road school and I am in rm 14 I am also a year six.
At first I thought this picture of the takahe was a pukeko. But not till i searched it up it obviously was a different species.
That was very interesting. But next time you could make your drawing a bit larger because I found it hard to read.
Anther thing you could fix up is making sure your title has a capital letter at the start. But otherwise.
Keep up the great work.
Danae